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Friday 7 September 2018

Girl Stuck In A Jar

Learn: I have been learning how to pre-access
my narrative writing


There was these two best friends and they did everything
together. When it was there last year for primar and they
were looking at different colleges and they signed up  
for the two same schools so that they
can get into the same school.
When they got the letter for what school they
were going to they both
were going to one of the schools that they
signed up for but both  of them got
into different schools.


Annie’s  P.O.V: When it was Annie’s first day of college Annie
was scared because she normally goes into school with Katie
on the first day of school and she has other friends to walk in
with her when Katie doesn’t come to school. Since it was the
first day of school and she didn’t know anyone and she didn’t
go to the same school as Katie she was scared to go in the
school because she didn’t know how anyone would react or
talk about her.


Katie’s P.O.V: When it was Katie’s first day of college she
wasn’t scared because she knew some people there because
some of her friends went to that school. When she walked
in the school she saw the people she knew and walked up to
them and she was talking to them. They were keeping
a secret the secret was that they need someone to put
in a jar so that they can get their other friend back.


Jayden’s P.O.V- When they saw Katie coming Jayden
said to her friends to act nice to her because she knows
her and has to be friends with her.
I think that I have found a person that
we can put in the jar and she said that they
could take Katie to the place where she could
open the jar and free there friend and Katie
will be stuck in the jar.


Just after Katie went to Jayden and her
friends they were being nice and then Jayden
said that they should skip school and Katie said
but it is the first day and that we shouldn’t skip school.
So they left Katie there and Katie ran up to them and said
she is going with them so she went with them.
They went to this place where they kept there
friend in the jar so when they got there they got
Katie to open the jar and there friend will be free and Katie
will be in the jar just as they left they heard a BANG!! they all jumped up because they were scared they looked back and
they saw Jayden laughing.


When Annie got back home from school of the
first day she was talking to her mum about and
she said that she had a great day and she made
a lot of new friends and the sad thing is that she
really missed Katie. After Annie finished talking
to her mum she went to see if Katie was at her house
because she wanted to tell her about her first day and
she wanted to hear about Katie’s first day. After the
first week of school Annie went back to Katie’s house
to talk to her then but her mum said that she was at a
friends house Annie walked back to her house and was
watching the news and it said that a girl named Katie
has been missing for a week now.

Annie thought that she was at a friends house so
she thought that it might have been a prank and
never thought about Katie or talked to her and no
one ever found Katie and Annie she finished college
and went to university and became a doctor and
Katie she was still in the jar.


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