I am a Year 8 student at St Pius X Catholic School in Auckland, New Zealand. I am in the SPX Nu'u Learning Space and my teacher are Mrs Tui and Mrs Lauchlan.
Hey Mei,I think that your writing is good but I think that if you proof read and added a bit more adjectives your writing would be much better.Good Job for the effort!Mikaela
Hey Mei,
ReplyDeleteI think that your writing is good but I think that if you proof read and added a bit more adjectives your writing would be much better.
Good Job for the effort!
Mikaela