Girl Stuck In A Jar

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There was these two best friends and they did everything

together. When it was there last year for primar and they

were looking at different colleges and they signed up  

for the two same schools so that they

can get into the same school.

When they got the letter for what school they

were going to they both

were going to one of the schools that they

signed up for but both  of them got

into different schools.

Annie’s  P.O.V: When it was Annie’s first day of college Annie

was scared because she normally goes into school with Katie

on the first day of school and she has other friends to walk in

with her when Katie doesn’t come to school. Since it was the

first day of school and she didn’t know anyone and she didn’t

go to the same school as Katie she was scared to go in the

school because she didn’t know how anyone would react or

talk about her.

Katie’s P.O.V: When it was Katie’s first day of college she

wasn’t scared because she knew some people there because

some of her friends went to that school. When she walked

in the school she saw the people she knew and walked up to

them and she was talking to them. They were keeping

a secret the secret was that they need someone to put

in a jar so that they can get their other friend back.

Jayden’s P.O.V- When they saw Katie coming Jayden

said to her friends to act nice to her because she knows

her and has to be friends with her.

I think that I have found a person that

we can put in the jar and she said that they

could take Katie to the place where she could

open the jar and free there friend and Katie

will be stuck in the jar.

Just after Katie went to Jayden and her

friends they were being nice and then Jayden

said that they should skip school and Katie said

but it is the first day and that we shouldn’t skip school.

So they left Katie there and Katie ran up to them and said

she is going with them so she went with them.

They went to this place where they kept there

friend in the jar so when they got there they got

Katie to open the jar and there friend will be free and Katie

will be in the jar just as they left they heard a BANG!! they all jumped up because they were scared they looked back and

they saw Jayden laughing.

When Annie got back home from school of the

first day she was talking to her mum about and

she said that she had a great day and she made

a lot of new friends and the sad thing is that she

really missed Katie. After Annie finished talking

to her mum she went to see if Katie was at her house

because she wanted to tell her about her first day and

she wanted to hear about Katie’s first day. After the

first week of school Annie went back to Katie’s house

to talk to her then but her mum said that she was at a

friends house Annie walked back to her house and was

watching the news and it said that a girl named Katie

has been missing for a week now.

Annie thought that she was at a friends house so

she thought that it might have been a prank and

never thought about Katie or talked to her and no

one ever found Katie and Annie she finished college

and went to university and became a doctor and

Katie she was still in the jar.