One day this man went fishing his name was Sam.
He thought since it was a sunny he should go fishing.
When he was watching the news to see what the
weather was going to be like today.
When he heard that it was going to be sunny all day long
he got up to go and get his fishing things.
When he left his house he forgot to turn
off the television and the news said that no one
should go fishing because there was crocodiles in the lake.
When Sam went to his boat he had to go and
grab it from his shed.
When he was in the boat he didn’t see any fish.
When he put his hock in the water he felt a
tug on the hock and it felt really
heavy and he thought there was no fish
but then he thought that they might have be hiding.
When he pulled his hock up he saw a crocodile.
grab it from his shed.
When he was in the boat he didn’t see any fish.
When he put his hock in the water he felt a
tug on the hock and it felt really
heavy and he thought there was no fish
but then he thought that they might have be hiding.
When he pulled his hock up he saw a crocodile.
When he saw the crocodile he ran across the boat and fell in the
water and more crocodiles came up to him.
Since he didn’t go far from the shore
he tried swim to shore.
He didn’t make it their and when the police
started to look for him they couldn’t
find him and he has been missing
for over a year.
water and more crocodiles came up to him.
Since he didn’t go far from the shore
he tried swim to shore.
He didn’t make it their and when the police
started to look for him they couldn’t
find him and he has been missing
for over a year.
Learn: I am learning to write a narrative story and the
assess our writing by our self.
assess our writing by our self.
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